Title: Hotwife Hotel
Author: Leda Lakynn
WhatWhat: Jon and Claire, a married couple who are bored and cranky with each other, are taking a vacation to try to rekindle their desire. They end up staying at the HW’s Bed & Breakfast, where a special drink turns Claire into a hotwife. If you don’t know what that is you’re not alone, but based on this story it’s a wildly horny woman interested in fucking other men in front of her husband.
The love packed its bags, moved out, went across the country and drowned in the Atlantic Ocean. I can’t remember the last time he paid attention to my pussy, or my tits, or, hell, gave me a decent kiss. (loc 36)
As tragic as that is, I’m getting a little turned on here by the author’s skillful use of commas. Oh, baby. You have no idea how much that means to me.
By the time dinner wrapped up, I felt the overwhelming urge to get fucked and not by my husband. I needed strange cock and lots of it. (loc 191)
All of our marital problems seemed to melt away in an instant. I’d find another man to satisfy my sexual needs, and Jon would get off to it. (loc 228)
I’m no marriage counselor, but I have my doubts that this would work for most people.
Verdict: I realize not everyone shares my kink for proper punctuation and sentence structure, but this was too skillfully written for me to not mention it. Every single dialogue tag dropped into place perfectly. Damn, girl.
As someone who dreads having to so much as make small talk with strangers at hotels, this was a slightly scary scenario, but since the characters were obviously having a good time I was able to relax and just go with it.