Author: Hank Wilder
M/F Version: Violated by Monsters: The Poltergeist Project by Hannah Wilde
WhatWhat: So, yeah: Like Hunter/Whitney Fox of Alli-Frog fame, this is another case where near-identical versions of the same story exist in M/F and M/M versions. I only read one, because life is short. Carl’s new house is haunted, but his wife doesn’t take it seriously. While she’s out of town he calls in a psychic, who advises him that the ghosts want to fuck him, and then they’ll leave.
I glance over at my wife, who lies face down in the pillows with a blissful look plastered across her sleeping face. (loc 19)
Okay, but how exactly do you know that if she’s lying facedown?
“Oh yeah, sorry!” I shout, shaking my head in exasperation as I reach into my purse and pull out two hundred dollars, fresh from the ATM. (loc 145)
Carl, honey, why are you carrying a purse? I suddenly suspect the M/F version of this was written first.
“They have spoken,” Ms. Peel informs me. “The ghosts here have a very simple request: to fuck you.” (loc 157)
I wonder what Ed and Lorraine Warren would make of that.
…between my wife’s long hours and her serious lack of attention to the situation at hand, I haven’t really found myself attracted to him in quite some time. (loc 186)
Yup, the “Violated by Monsters” version was definitely written first.
I suddenly find myself on my knees, looking up at an assortment of floating dicks that encircle me. (loc 216)
Verdict: I’m really, truly disturbed that a) the sex scene in this follows a very set Chuck Tingle pattern, and b) I’ve read enough Chuck Tingle to notice that. Much like the infamous sex rituals of fanfic (one finger, two fingers, three fingers, cock), this follows a predictable outline: sucking off multiple dudes, getting buttfucked while sucking off multiple dudes, multiple dudes do the buttfucking, one dude lies on his back and pulls the protagonist onto his cock, some other dude joins in from the rear to double-penetrate the human guy’s ass so he can self-describe it as “totally reamed out.” I’ve seen it done with unicorns and doughnuts, and now ghosts.
There’s a second story included called Chimera Group Encounter, but I’ll review that one separately.